Lawyer Paragraph

 

Today we did a quick draft on how to write a lawyer paragraph , this is currently my feedback results. 

Our topic was ' Screen time negatively affects learning ' .

Book Character Review

Title: The goldfish boy

Author: Lisa Thompson

Illustrator: Mike Lowery

The year it got published: 2017

Age recommendation:  I recommend this book for kids aged 10 - 12.

What the story is about: The story is about a boy named Mathew and he is afraid of germs, he used to be friends with a boy named Jake then they became enemies and ever since the tragedy that happened in his family he decided to keep a big secret from everyone until one day.

Rating out of 10: 8 / 10

I learnt that you could create nearly everything on google drawing while doing this. I really like the way I created the eyes and body. Next time I think I should try and add more to my picture within the time given and not get the hands off google.