Lawyer Paragraph

 

Today we did a quick draft on how to write a lawyer paragraph , this is currently my feedback results. 

Our topic was ' Screen time negatively affects learning ' .

Netball Report

This is my slide about my report on netball. This was made in week 4 and 3 .
I really like the way that I created my own netball court on google drawings.
Next time I think I could add more into the conclusion.

Buddy book picture

We created a illustration of what Mr.House could eat with our buddies.
I really liked that my buddy respectfully helped create our picture.
Next time I should try and finish it in the time given.

Definition poem

Definition poem        
I learned that a definition poem is a poem that you start with a question saying "What is a..." and finish with " That's a...".
Next time I should try add  more descriptive language.

What is an ocean?
A home for sea creatures.
Slowly drifting things out to sea.
Blue or grey reflecting off the sky.
Sits still like a piece of crystal clear glass.
That's the ocean.

Haiku poem 
I learned that Haiku poems have originated from Japan.
Next time I should try to include adjectives or adverbs.

Crayfish

Crayfish under rocks
The very orange legs stick out
The long tail flaps around

By Reymiale

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